Writing dating emails

The first thing that grabbed my attention about your profile was your username…I moved to Seattle from Texas a few months ago…I love it out here but I do miss home a lot. I really liked what I read about you and your interests.

While I do live in the ‘burbs, I am absolutely in love with Seattle.

I believe I’m great at making almost anything fun…even a boring cup of coffee.

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As with the earlier emails, I felt this email had too much of him describing himself and describing what he saw in her.

Not bad conversations, just happening too early and maybe better to be had in person (depends on who you’re talking to I guess).

I would also hesitate asking a woman where she’s originally from in a first email. You seem like the kind of energetic, open person I might get along with.

I get why he asks but some people are more sensitive about risks with online dating than others so I’d save it for a later email. I love staying busy, and I can usually have fun doing just about anything. Would you like to chat sometime…or since you like brunch so much, maybe meet in the city at somepoint?

If you see an 10 emails in your inbox with the title “Hi” and one with the title “Courage! You have a great outlook on life, and it seems like a good head on your shoulders.

I think it’s really important to make everyday fun.

Still, as I was writing this I came up with my title and liked it a bit better…but either would work well in my opinion.

Overall I thought the emails were fine but saw these as the biggest changes: I would shorten the emails. I see the first email as something short and simple to get her to look at my profile.

I’m very much looking forward to the summer and nice weather. Enjoy your weekend Again, I just shorten things a lot here.

I assume she’ll appreciate the teacher comment based on friends I have who are teachers.

I change it from brunch to coffee because coffee is easier to do than brunch for most people (and I can’t help but wonder if every guy would ask her out to brunch because it’s in her profile).

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